so cute bruh...
This sounds really good overall!
I love the layers, and the drum line is great!
Only criticism is that the background melody/pads don't go with the vocals all that well for some parts of the verses.
I love them wubs :D
Near the end, there's some serious phase issues with the vocals I think, or is that just a filter? idk but it sounds really weird to me, but thats just personal taste so don't listen to that xD
The phase issues at the end is probably from the original sample. Thanks for the kind words though!
sounds pretty good!
All I can say is to not make the kick quite as loud, as it's kinda overpowering the rest of the mix.
Also, I'd recommend not just looping the melody a lot. Try doing variations of the melody throughout.
Also also, at 0:46 you start clipping pretty hard, so try to not make it so loud that it does that. The quality of your music will not get better.
Overall, it's decent; that's cool that you're starting to get into this again!
True, this isnt a finished product, as I am making a full 3 min version. Im gonna edit a lot.
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